高中英语作文：锤炼句式——学会运用高级结构

锤炼句式——学会运用高级结构

高考评分标准中的“复杂结构的运用及较多的语法结构”就是指句子结构的复合性和句型的多样性。不论是复杂结构的运用，如强调句、倒装句等句型、含有名词性从句、定语从句或状语从句的复合句，还是较多的语法结构，如分词和不定式等非谓语动词的运用都指向句式的转换问题。不容置疑，这些复杂结构的运用及较多的语法结构会增加文章的表达力度、提升文章的档次。增分句式(一)　独立又相依的并列句并列句是用连词把两个或两个以上的简单句连起来，这种简单句常被叫做分句。并列句中的各个简单句彼此独立，互不依从，但它们表达的意思之间有一定的关系，通常用并列连词连接起来。并列连词之前可用逗号，也可不用逗号。它的基本模式是：简单句＋并列连词＋简单句(一)常见并列句的类型及并列连词

类型	连词
并列关系(递进关系)	and，when，both...and...，not only...but (also)．..，neither...nor...
转折关系	but, yet, whereas, however
选择关系	or，otherwise，or else, either...or...，not...but...
因果关系	because, as, for, so, therefore, thus, due to
对比关系	while

(1)He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompanyme and share many funny things with meabout his work. (2020·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)他每天都很努力，但他也会抽出时间陪我，和我分享他工作中的许多有趣的事情。(2)Li Jiang recommends the traditionalChinese dress while Su Hua prefers theschool uniform.(2019·江苏高考书面表达)李江推荐中国传统服装，而苏华更喜欢校服。(3)You may have trouble in adjustingyourself to the life in Beijing，so I suggest that you makefull preparations in advance.(2018·北京高考书面表达)你可能在适应北京生活方面有困难，因此我建议你提前做好充分准备。(4)If you’re interested in it, either you may send an email to [e-mail] you can sign up in person.(2017·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)如果你感兴趣，您可以发送电子邮件至[e-mail]或亲自报名。(二)使用并列句的注意事项1．not only...but also...在连接两个并列分句时，如果not only置于句首，not only所在的分句需用部分倒装语序。(1)Not only would I be able to experience fruit picking, but also I could also feast on the sweetness!  (2020·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)我不仅可以体验水果采摘，还可以尽情享受这些水果！(2)Not only do we take volleyball and basketball courses，but our school also holds all kinds of competitions.(2018·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)我们不仅学习排球和篮球课程，而且我们学校还举办各种比赛。2．表示“虽然……但是……”这一转折关系时，连接词but不能与though/although连用。虽然我当时很累，但是我感到非常幸福。(1)Although I was very tired then butI felt very happy.(×)(2)Although I was very tired then, Ifelt very happy. (√)(3)I was very tired then but I feltvery happy.  (√)3．表示因果关系的连词so不与because，as等表示原因的连词连用。因为他生病，所以他那天没去上学。(1)Because/As he was ill so he didn’tgo to school that day.(×)(2)Because/As he was ill，he didn’t go to school that day. (√)(3)He was ill so he didn’t go to schoolthat day.  (√)即时训练　用适当的并列连词填空1．(2019·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)To sum up, I wish you could live upto the expectations of our school._And__I firmly believe hard work will payoff!2．(2019·江苏高考书面表达)The school uniforms are fine，_but__not special enough to givea unique Chinese flavour.3．(2018·天津高考书面表)I know you once participated in theRobotics Competition and won the award，_so__youmust have accumulated much experience in it.4．(2017·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)I’m sure that it will interest you，_for__ you have been enthusiasticabout ping-pong. _Therefore__，I’dlike to invite you to join the team.往期回顾：高中英语作文：靓化词汇——学会运用高级表达

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